Saturday 18 March 2017

Rough Cut Feedback


  • Focus more on subject, less on foliage 
  • Technical skill, camera focus 
  • David Lynch - Twin peaks, Fire walk with me
  • Narrative development; signposting and clarity, less ambiguous 
  • Dialogue - script; social/political link to identities in the media 
  • other shots of things going backwards - bridge the single take 
  • Memento - intertextuality