- Excellent research + referencing. Superb bibliography.
- Very good textual analysis + application of theory
- Very articulate, academic writing
- Great spelling, punctuation and grammar alongside writing style
- Good use of key theories + ideologies
- Fluent + analytical explanation of topic
- Great justification with historical text
EBI:
- Reference the theorists in the footnotes
- Include black identities theories like Alvarado
- Include more audience theory - uses + gratifications
- Include post-colonialism theory and news values
Next draft aim = A*
Action Plan:
- I am going to reference all my theorists in the footnotes
- I will try to include more black identity theory, especially Alvarado
- I will try to include more audience theory where possible
- I will add news values in my final paragraph when speaking about FOX news
- I will try to tidy up my expression to create a furthermore fluent essay
- I will change the footnotes so that the page number of the books are within the footnotes rather than the titles
- I will also remove any songs from my footnotes that do not need to be referenced as a footnote
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